Posted by: naveenkrhalli | 13/11/2012

ಕಣ್ಣಿರ ಮರೆಸಲ? ಅಥವ ನಿನ್ನ ನೆನಪನ್ನು ಅಳಿಸಲ?


ಬರೆಯದ ಎಷ್ಟೋ ಸಾಲು ಮನದಲ್ಲಿದೆ. ಬರೆಯಲು ಹೋದರೆ ಕಂಬನಿ ಕಣ್ಣ ಮುಚ್ಚಿಸುತ್ತದೆ.

ಏನು ಮಾಡಲಿ ನಾ, ಇರಲಿ ಬಿಡು ಆ ಮಾತು ನನಲ್ಲಿ, ಅದರಿಂದ ಎಂದು ಕಂಬನಿ ಇಂದ ನಿನ್ನ ನೋಟ ಮರೆಯಾಗದಿರಲಿ.

ಖಾಲಿ ದಾರಿಯಲ್ಲಿ, ಬಿಸಿಲ ಹವೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ನಡೆವಾಗ ನೆನಪಾದೆ ನೀನು.

ಬಿಸಿಲ ಬಯಸಿದ ನಾನು ಕಂಡೆ ನೀ ಕಳುಹಿಸಿದಂತೆ ಮಳೆಯನ್ನೂ.

ನಿನ್ನೊಡನೆ ನಡೆಯಲಾರದಿದ್ದಾಗ ನನಗೇಕೆ ಮಳೆ,

ಕಣ್ಣಿರ ಮರೆಸಲ? ಅಥವ ನಿನ್ನ ನೆನಪನ್ನು ಅಳಿಸಲ?

—-ನವೀನ್


Responses

  1. Its superb!

  2. kavithe is very nice

  3. Thank you….🙂

  4. Simply Superb..:)

  5. thank you naveen

  6. wah, super, very nice………………

  7. Thank you all for your comments. Keep the support going….

  8. wow super realy good

  9. nimma kalpanay sumadhura….edhu kalpaneyo… anubhavo gothilla………adhre nivu bareda kavana manadhalavanu muthide………nimage shubhavagali……

  10. super sir

  11. anthu dhari thappi bandhu ninna kavana Odhidhinappa

  12. nimma kavangalige nanu anthu spurthiagi dhene ….

  13. mansina novugalanu maresuva maddanthive:)
    by. sheshagiri kolker, shimoga

  14. Dhanyavaadagalu…..🙂

  15. feeling heart

  16. simply sweet

  17. so..nice

  18. Thanks…..

  19. nice one…..

  20. super guru i like u so much

  21. nice lines superb

  22. Ur realy great thans a lot…

  23. ella kavanagalu tumba chennagive, thanks

  24. very good……

  25. Thanks all….

  26. Ello ondu gudinalli pakshi yante avitu kond nanna Hruday ninna kavan odida mele gudu dittu tampada vatavarana dalli haraduvantagide. By Hasen.N

  27. Its really heart touching Naveen…bhavanegalu nenapugalu haage…nenadare kanngalu thumbi barutthave…

  28. Its really heart touching… Howdu bhavanegalu ..nenapugalu haage….yavaga nenapinge bandaru kannugalu thumbibaruttave…

  29. ನಿಮ್ಮ ಕವನದ ಖಾಲಿ ದಾರಿಯಲಿ ತು0ಬ ಇಷ್ಟವಾಯಿತು … ನನಗೂ ನನ್ನ ಕವನಗಳನ್ನು ಹ0ಚಿಕೊಳ್ಳುವ ಬಯಕೆ

  30. nimma bhavanegalu adbhutavagive anna

  31. it was nice poem which bring the sarrow of a lover.

  32. bhavenya bandiyannu athi… preti emba hoorige…kannina kanasanne daari yagisi..sagutiriva nimage nimma destiny adaa nimma gelatiyu bega sigali endu ichustiruveee…:-)

  33. Nice lines Naven..

  34. Hi….Mr Naveen, First 2 Lines Nange Thumba Esta Aythu……… Nice, I Dont Know Who R U But Without Feeling & Experience Cant Write These Kavana, Just B Smiling Keep Rocking………..!!!!

    Nanna Prithi Sullalla,
    Nanna Huduga Mosagaranalla,
    Adaru Nanna Prithi Uliyalilla…………!!! Good Luck…..

  35. Tumba chennaagive ee saalugalu Bhaavanatmaka Jeevagalige maatra ivugala Value gottagodu.
    Danyavaadagalu

  36. ಪ್ರೀತಿಯ ಮಿತ್ರರೆಲ್ಲರಿಗೂ ಹೃದಯತುಂಬು ಸ್ವಾಗತ
    if u want to facebook name
    shreevnds

  37. Ninna kaal gejje manigalige
    Nanna kanasannu kattiddene……
    Jopaana Hudugi

  38. Thumba channagidhe

  39. super kavana riii e saalu super agidhe so yenri madodhru preethina yege alisodhu sir

  40. Preethi yellarigu siguttade, sikka preethiyalli yellarigu ee reethi anubhavagalaguttade… preethi alisalu asaadya, adanna bittu preethisid managalalli eddare uttama…🙂

  41. Yella mitrarigu dhanyavaadagalu…… nimma protsaha sadaa nanage erali….🙂

  42. mareyallagada prrethiya ennaleyàlli marethanthiruva bava thorukeke mathra manasigalla antha manasugalla manadaalada mathugala manikya nimna kavanagalu

  43. mananonda manasuggala maayalooka edu kavanagala aramane

  44. Superb lines ……

  45. preethi anubhava prithsovaaga gotthalla a prithi dooragi a nenapugalu kaduthvalla aga nijavad prithi anubhava aguthe prithisdor dooradru prithi dooragalla yakandre prithi yavathidru prithine adu maryhoho mathalla jothe eto mansu

  46. nee kotta prithi maryokagthilla maneli kotta math uliskolokagthilla everdu ellandre e jeeva uliyolla

  47. prithi annode ege jotheli eddaga anu antha gothagalla havalu doooora hodaga printhi andre eynu antha gothagodu… prithine nan giva miss u… nenapalle erthiya ninu

  48. endendu ninnagagi eruva jeeva edu edre ninkooda Ella nin nenap kooda bere yochnenu e mind nalli moodo chance kooda nan mindge kodalla entha situation bandru sareene

  49. asthithva ne suttaythu ennenidru usiraado shava e jeeva savelide


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